My very first fanfic. Thou shalt read!

To start today's blog off, I'd like to say a few things.
One, Sir Angus and Sir Super7, this is to stop you from complaining about C/P'd stuffs. Oh, you heard me. I am going to write my very own...
Ness and Lucas Fanfiction! I'm gonna post it up here first, so tell me what you think. xD
Two, if you're interested in joining SnailMS, we sorta need new people. Comment for links. D:
And three, if you don't like yaoi, well too bad, 'cause you're gonna have to read it today. >:D
After can y'all help me think of a good title? I have absolutely no idea what to name it. xD


Chapter 1

Ness gazed up at the clouds as he sat upon his favourite grassy knoll on the hillside overlooking Smash School.(A/N: Already been done before, but I don't know what else to put...)Looking up at vaguely frying-pan and golf club shaped clouds, he suddenly remembered...

"OH CRAP! I FORGOT ABOUT PEACH'S HOME EC CLASS!" The young PSI wielder started running down to Smash School from the hill.
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As all the students settled in to class, save one, Miss Peach Toadstool stood up and marked all the students for her class.

"Nana?"

"Here," replied a small girl in a pink Eskimo parka.

"Popo?"

"Here," said a little boy in a blue Eskimo parka. He seemed to be sticking right to Nana's side, but Peach waved it off.

"Okay, then, Lucas?" continued the teacher in pink.

A small, muttered response followed.

"Lucas, you're going to have to speak up, or I am going to have to keep you after school and teach you how to speak properly." chatised Princess Peach to the small blond boy in the back row.

"I-I'm here, Miss P-Peach..." stuttered Lucas quietly.

"Okay, then..Ness?"

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There was an awkward silence throughout the class. It was soon disrupted by a loud shout of "PK Thunder!" and an echoing 'boom' as a red-capped boy with black hair flew through the room, smacked into the wall, and slid down to the floor.

Everyone was shocked as this burnt little boy jumped up from the floor, and went to his desk.

"Here, Miss Peach," shouted Ness,"Sorry I was late, I..um..."

He had to think of an excuse, and fast!

"I was, uh, conspiring against the government!", quickly stated Ness.

Granted, he knew that was a few years back, but it's the truth. And what did the teacher know?

"Yes, okay..take a seat, Mr. Ness," replied Peach. "You're still going to get a detention, along with Lucas here, since I know for a fact that your little conspiracy happened 4 years ago, mister."

The two PSI boys, or rather, mostly Ness, groaned.

"But--", started Ness.

"No buts, Mister, you're going to have to write me a thousand word essay on why not to tell lies, and Lucas here is going to learn how to speak loudly and properly." Peach cut him off curtly."I don't want ANY excuses, I want you to come straight to my class at 3:15 today. Understood?"

The boys-still mostly Ness- replied sadly,"Yes, Miss Peach..."




So, how'd y'all enjoy that? o_o
Now I have to go to class, so Adieu!